Really want some feedback for my poem please:)?

It's incredible...there's not very much that I would change. I would say, overall, that the poem is about a 9.5. You're an excellent poet, my dear. The ONLY comment that I would make is that it could be a tad bit more precise. I might alter the first stanza slightly just so that the mood flows more smoothly throughout the poem. I think that the line "They will open up for you" could be a little shorter just so that it's more emotionally charged, as it's a very strong line. Maybe you could change it to "They will open for you" or just "They will open." I always love poems about heart-break. They're my absolute favorite and the most touching to my heart. Keep practicing and keep writing! You have a lot of talent.